Some comment about the flyer

the second redesign flyer.(http://selenga1705.blogspot.com/)


the first redesign flyer.(http://selenga1705.blogspot.com/)

the original work.

In my opinion:

• The original flyer is so boring. The author want to make the flyer to be more attractive. However, he(she) are not good at typography so it isn't impressive to the viewers.
• The second flyer is better. The good side of the flyer is straight to the problem following the "less is more" trend and good use of contrast. The author reduces the size of text to imply the reducing is not so creative. It imply a picture. In general, this flyer could be remarkable.
• The first flyer is the best. It is really compressive to me. Women as a vital viewer will be attracted by the beautiful body. Two curses create a good decoration for the flyer and it also composites with the text create a perfect body image. It will make the viewer be remarkable.